Winged Beauty

interesting story, i am down for it , waiting for more chapters

damn... portals and monsters with villain and heroes with unique world building ...though I hope mc axel turned out to evil rather than white good boy. lol

Please fix the pronouns' mistakes. So far, hims become hers, and vice versa. It really ruins the immersion and is just straight out confusing. Good story so far, but just please fix the pronoun mistakes.

Super Good . It brings me to tears just how much the author improves. He's other book is also good in terms of story telling but this one is on another level in terms of how clean and well written it is 😭😭😭

I have read about 260 chapters now in 1,5 weeks, I feel like the Story is ruined at the point when almond leaves the first layer early, it was no smooth transition and i am absolutely dissapointed, I had high hopes to have found a gem here, but I didnt. I like the wriring a lot and the quality of your chapters is top, so is your Charakter Design and the Logic which you introduced into your World, but as mentioned in my point of view you Ruined your own pace and for me the pace of the Story which is why I must give a low value to your book.I hope in your next book you will not Do the Same mistake again and I am looking forward to your future works.

     "Carl, we just want to know why you did this, please answer seriously, we just want to help you."

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

[😃]-"In theory, I will access the spell for you. "